Tuesday’s Teaser

As a reader, I never noticed the little things that make a BIG difference in a book. Spending the last ten months as a member of a writer’s group has made me realize a few things.
One of the main is, you need a hook. You need something that grabs the reader and pulls them into the story. That’s why I’m posting the first few sentences in my WIP (working title: The Runt).

Andrew nudged the phone closer to his son. β€œC’mon son, grow some balls already. Stop staring at the phone and make the call.”

By the way, here’s the son in that quote:

Yes, the first paragraph is talking about this guy’s balls. How’s that for a hook? πŸ˜‰

About Falyn Donaldson

Author and Naughty-minded girl
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