Tuesday’s Teaser

As a reader, I never noticed the little things that make a BIG difference in a book. Spending the last ten months as a member of a writer’s group has made me realize a few things.
One of the main is, you need a hook. You need something that grabs the reader and pulls them into the story. That’s why I’m posting the first few sentences in my WIP (working title: The Runt).

Andrew nudged the phone closer to his son. “C’mon son, grow some balls already. Stop staring at the phone and make the call.”

By the way, here’s the son in that quote:

Yes, the first paragraph is talking about this guy’s balls. How’s that for a hook? 😉

About Falyn Donaldson

Author and Naughty-minded girl
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